Tuesday, October 6, 2009

the summery of the books Wake

Jainy starts the school year again, after a short summer break. she gets on the bus and goes blind she can't see a thing.
her fingers go numb. she knows exactly whats happening. she's stuck in another dream. she wants to scream, but her voice is gone. she falls off her seat. she can't control it. she's having a sesure. she shaking around the bus. the driver stops, tells her to get back in her seat. Jainy hears her but can't do any thing about it. her whole body is numb.

Tuesday, September 29, 2009

stay away from me!!!

Do you ever get that feeling like your going to throw-up. I do. I feel like I have a fever, i can't even read i'm so sick, IT SUCKS!!!!!!!! I have to lay in bed all day, and do nut'n I am so boured. I'm lucky i'm awake enough to type. =) but I am. well now i'm not so I guess, bye, =(

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

my responce to The Swan poem

The Swan, by Mary Oliver



In this poem, I thought that the way Mary said "Did you too see it, drifting, all night."And "A perfect commotion of silk and linen as it leaned." That sent a sudden feeling through me, I don't know exactly what it was but it was DEFINITELY SOMETHING!!! The thing that was surprising is the fact that she used the word "shrill." What I'm trying to say is, well, here's an example. . ."shrill dark music - like the rain pelting the tree at late night a water fall Knifing down the black ledges." I didn't know what she meant by that but then my dad told me.

The cool thing about it is, I can relate to the poem. I mean I describe the object in my head but when it comes to writing it down on paper I sometimes get it right. But

not really. What were we talking about again? Oh yeah, well i can if it's typing but not writing.

I don't know why, but thats the way I am.


Friday, September 4, 2009

Lit. Circles

What i read so far in the book "winter" is, Miki got up from a
good dream. Saw two shadows and grabbed a weapon. She pointed it at the zipper
of the tent and prepared to fire. But when the person on the other side of the tent
wall, unzipped the zipper, they peaked in. Miki put the gun down and looked
closer. It was two hundred old lady's. The oldest lady said "told you this wasn't

our tent". Then when Micki and Hiro packed up their stuff, and went hiking
to find a way to Utar. Hiro's spirit guide went first way out into the forest
in front of them. and hat gave Hiro and Miki time to talk. oh did I tell you that
Miki and Hiro are together? Like together together? Well any way, they are.
And they talked about what was happening to their relationship. so after that they
went down the path that Anra ( the spirit guide) told them to go on. That led them to
the bad people that they were trying to avoid. But that night, Anra told Hiro that she
had to leave because she had someone Else to preform other duties. and she pointed
them in the direction she wanted them to go. And sure enough, they got to Utar safely.
But when they got there, they got on the boat to leave and the captain welcomed them
aboard. but when it got cold the crew said to come inside. When they got in they were invted to play some poker. they accepted. they walked in the room and it was Anra and the chief of the bad guys. Hiro dropped to his knees, and said "do what you wan't with me but leave her alone."akuzu (the chief of the bad guys) said " good choice" then miki past out.

Friday, March 20, 2009

Chocolate!

By: Mary Jorgensen

A lot of people (mostly men/boys) don’t like Chocolate!!! Can you believe that? I mean who doesn’t like chocolate? I would die without chocolate! It’s basically my life when I’m not sick.
Sometimes I am so sick I don’t want any candy at all!! I can barley eat anything. All I want to do is sleep and read!!!

Friday, March 13, 2009

scene 1

Abby was running to the park and wanted to kiss someone and saw a stranger on her way (to the park!). The stranger was a girl who had her name on the back of her sweater. It said Jasper Gasmen. She was tall, had alfalfa hair! And she had a dog, you know those little Pugs, yeah, she has one. Anyway Abby ran and ran and ran and ran until she finally, caught up with her. And for no reason at all, she turned and kissed her! Abby managed to run! She took the dog to the park!!!


. . . to be continued!!!

Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Family and Friends

ok guys, I love you but some times you get on my nerves, and yes I am talking to
my family. now that thats over I can get to what I ment to say, wait, that was what I ment to say. HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA Ha.
I also want to say I love you and I always will!!! But thats just me, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, kj, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk,jk, jk, jk, jk, jk, jk. coooooooooool!!!