Tuesday, September 29, 2009

stay away from me!!!

Do you ever get that feeling like your going to throw-up. I do. I feel like I have a fever, i can't even read i'm so sick, IT SUCKS!!!!!!!! I have to lay in bed all day, and do nut'n I am so boured. I'm lucky i'm awake enough to type. =) but I am. well now i'm not so I guess, bye, =(

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

my responce to The Swan poem

The Swan, by Mary Oliver



In this poem, I thought that the way Mary said "Did you too see it, drifting, all night."And "A perfect commotion of silk and linen as it leaned." That sent a sudden feeling through me, I don't know exactly what it was but it was DEFINITELY SOMETHING!!! The thing that was surprising is the fact that she used the word "shrill." What I'm trying to say is, well, here's an example. . ."shrill dark music - like the rain pelting the tree at late night a water fall Knifing down the black ledges." I didn't know what she meant by that but then my dad told me.

The cool thing about it is, I can relate to the poem. I mean I describe the object in my head but when it comes to writing it down on paper I sometimes get it right. But

not really. What were we talking about again? Oh yeah, well i can if it's typing but not writing.

I don't know why, but thats the way I am.


Friday, September 4, 2009

Lit. Circles

What i read so far in the book "winter" is, Miki got up from a
good dream. Saw two shadows and grabbed a weapon. She pointed it at the zipper
of the tent and prepared to fire. But when the person on the other side of the tent
wall, unzipped the zipper, they peaked in. Miki put the gun down and looked
closer. It was two hundred old lady's. The oldest lady said "told you this wasn't

our tent". Then when Micki and Hiro packed up their stuff, and went hiking
to find a way to Utar. Hiro's spirit guide went first way out into the forest
in front of them. and hat gave Hiro and Miki time to talk. oh did I tell you that
Miki and Hiro are together? Like together together? Well any way, they are.
And they talked about what was happening to their relationship. so after that they
went down the path that Anra ( the spirit guide) told them to go on. That led them to
the bad people that they were trying to avoid. But that night, Anra told Hiro that she
had to leave because she had someone Else to preform other duties. and she pointed
them in the direction she wanted them to go. And sure enough, they got to Utar safely.
But when they got there, they got on the boat to leave and the captain welcomed them
aboard. but when it got cold the crew said to come inside. When they got in they were invted to play some poker. they accepted. they walked in the room and it was Anra and the chief of the bad guys. Hiro dropped to his knees, and said "do what you wan't with me but leave her alone."akuzu (the chief of the bad guys) said " good choice" then miki past out.